Oh god, you are haunting my soul.
You say you hated high school – But to me you were one of the only reasons I ever loved it. Running into you unearthed some very, very heavy emotion. I close my eyes and all I am greeted with is the sight of the piercing cerulean of your eyes. This torrent of emotion is breaking my soul.
I fell for you again, instantly. A turgent current passionately embraced by every fiber of my being. I always burnt a candle brightly for you – just this chance encounter has it burning as hotly as ever. I’m sorry for lying to you but at the time saying I was okay was the best course of action. My heart is being torn apart honestly – I thought I would never feel anything this like again.
How long do I have to wait to tell you that I love you? —Taxis & Trenchcoats
This article appears in Oct 27 – Nov 2, 2016.
This is not a bitch. Just melancholic dribble.
Dribble would make this bitch interesting. Such unrequited love and sappy sentiment (or is it sediment?) belongs in a Hallmark greeting card. Under the category of ‘Haunting Azure (a fancy name for blue often employed by students of Creative Writing 101) Eyes’.
T.T. yah…I had to look it up too…
Unrequited love, though harsh in many ways, is often the best as the warts of everyday life never intrude on such a ‘perfect love’. However, the chances are if you got to live with your perceived soulmate for a while you may be wanting your freedom soon enough. But then again, the chance re-meeting may indeed be kismet and things may work out. So tell them what gives on your end and see how things go. But be truly prepared for all responses from ‘sure let’s try it out and start by dating’ to ‘you must be mad’. If not prepared for either response let the past rest and and finally accept the results of another road not taken.
Where’s the bitch?
Someone keeps slipping passages from their gawdawful, maudlin, never-to-be-published debut novel in the Bitch section.
I wish they’d release the whole thing online so some literary reviewers can tell them for real how dreadful their self-consciopus attempts to write “evocotively” are.
Don’t quit your day job, toots.
Blurgh.
Learn some basic writing skills before breaking out the thesaurus. “Very, very heavy emotion”. Who uses the word “very” twice in a row? OP, you’re insulting to the written word. Maybe wait until someone evokes more than one emotion before writing again.
You just did.
You’re a nice person, I really like you too!!
When was high school? Last year? fuck.
The title of this bitch makes me laugh every time I see it. Someone needs to redirect their fan fiction to a paper shredder.